A twiglet is a short phrase. Or a word. Maybe two. Its aim is to “prompt” a flow. A thought. A memory. If something comes to mind, write. A polished piece isn’t the goal; creativity is. Leave a link, if you’d like your work read, but note that comments should not be expected. Twiglets are posted on Tuesdays.
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The hotel maid
winks at wrink-
led linens
mid-afternoon
as she puts out
fresh towels.
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Ooh la la!
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Fun – especially after a honeymoon or a secret tryst? 🙂
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saucey one 🙂
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LOVE this. I wanted to play with “wink” and “wrinkled,” too, but with parentheses. Didn’t end up happening. I love your take…I also see “lead linens” – something heavy is afoot.
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You should write a something heavy afoot version!
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Clever!
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Young Mama’s hands
soft as satin
trembled thin and wrinkled
in old age.
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Very nice.
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“trembled thin” is just beautiful.
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Sad fact of aging. Beautiful, Sal!
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The infant traveled light-years
on a wrinkled sheet:
fabric for his cape.
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Really nice depth to this one. Makes me feel like I took the cheap and easy way out!
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oh soooo fun! Super child is born 🙂
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Superman! 🙂
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Another beauty, Sal!
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Repentance was the iron
smoothing the wrinkles
atonement made white.
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Linen first begins as flax
so, at night (under it),
We can relax.
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Cute. ❤️
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toy boats cruise the lake,
their wrinkled handkerchief sails
wind-blown.
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Oh yes! Very good!
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Oh, I can see this!
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Rumpled clouds,
The sky like wrinkled linen…
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Rumpled clouds- nice description.
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YES! LOVE!
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Love that image!
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Thanks!
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Here’s mine. https://foundlines.wordpress.com/2017/06/13/twiglet-28/
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Nice! I think we both went down the “hot weather” line of thinking!
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It seems so!
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Hot is in the eye of the beholder…
😉
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That’s why my pillowcase is satin!
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June heat lays on us
Like linen from the dryer —
Wrinkled shirts and pants.
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Ah, sorry, messed up…
June lays upon us
Like linen hot from dryer —
Wrinkled shirts and pants.
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Either way… sometimes fingers slip for a reason.
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I hate to disappoint but I think I much prefer this version!
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I’ve been reading some mysteries salted with romance… and came up with:
Perspective
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I hope everyone has a chance to read this delightful piece.
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Thank you… 😉
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I love the route you took on this one, Jules. Unique!
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[…] for Misky’s Twiglets: the shorter the […]
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Nice illustration for this one.
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Secrets
wooden fences
hide backyard clothesline
white-washed dirty linen
tempest whipped
hung out to dry
I know….left out the word “wrinkled” but this is what came to mind. Went to the dark side on this one — metaphorically. See post with photo at http://lillianthehomepoet.com
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I love the feel of this; stormy and suspect. Nice.
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Thanks. I always like your twiglet prompts — the shorter the better 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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“white-washed dirty linen” – Sounds like a dark tale in the making.
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hmmm yes I can see tempest whipped creating a few winkles 😉
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Love this, particularly the ending. Wistful and strong.
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https://whimsygizmo.wordpress.com/2017/06/14/interview/
Happy writing, all.
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Brilliant character development with a cracking end.
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[…] imaginary garden, real toads: of insomnia and sleep; twiglet # 28; wrinkled linen and insomnia seem a perfect match (image: […]
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A little late, but here
https://fredherring.wordpress.com/2017/06/16/for-twiglet-28/
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I like the way your ‘inner-eye’ catches moments and allows the reader to become a passenger. This one is a perfect example of that.
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Sometimes its the cast and not the star that grabs your attention.
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Glad to be back here!
https://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2017/06/20/iron-me-out
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And delighted to see your return!
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Thanks, Misk.
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Her body recoiled from the harsh wrinkled linen on the bed.
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