A twiglet is a short phrase. Or a word. Maybe two. Its aim is to “prompt” a flow. A thought. A memory. If something comes to mind, write. A polished piece isn’t the goal; creativity is. Leave a link, if you’d like your work read, but note that comments should not be expected. Twiglets are posted on Tuesdays.
Sorry Not Sorry
Your apology falls like fine crumbs
from crisp crackers, clumps like
chocolate cake speckles white icing,
like day old bread offered to birds.
They are the words sprinkled in
and among the ‘I’m sorry’
but, if, again… excuses that let
you off the hook with yourself.
I’m getting my broom to sweep
away these crumbs, you included.
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Oh yeah, those dubious sorry sorts. You tell ‘um!
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Oh, I can imagine this all to well.
And maybe in not the same words, have done that to a couple of early beaus.
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Nice!!
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Love this, Debi!
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Remains of the Day
We walk through the singing rustle of fallen leaves,
our boots brush them by as if the wings of eagles.
And blind-eyed fog curls along the creek
as autumn’s remains turn into fine wet crumbs.
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My kind of autumn!
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I’ve been trying to get those fine wet crumbs off my deck. But you make it sound so sweet and tender…. “blind-eyed fog” Oh, Yes
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Our trees are mostly oak and lime (not the fruit), and goodness me they are dropping like rain off the branches right now. They haven’t even turned colour yet, and they’re dropping. Far too early. I think the trees are stressed.
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Oh, they started early here too but we are finally getting some color.
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A perfect moment.
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The first colors are the mix yellows from the willows, small ash and the horse chestnuts.
The oaks or some other early dropper have all turned brown and crunchy.
Just getting some oranges…. maybe some of the trees that are supposed to be reds… just turning.
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I had to run some errands this morning.
The title may not quite match the piece, but it is what came to mind:
Mr. Trebek , “What collects at the bottom of toasters?”
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I like not being able to find my way out of an enchanted forest!
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Catherine de’ Medici
Declared snuff
Herba Regina
The finest crumbs of
Tobacco
To go up your royal
Nose.
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Hahahahaa. Thanks for the bit of trivia and a good laugh.
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Hahahaha!
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Good one, q!
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Hahaha!
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One way to relieve stress?
I tried smoking a cigarette once… I’ve got my own vices but altering my ego by pen is my favorite. 😉
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Agreed!
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https://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2017/10/10/some-crumbs
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https://fredherring.wordpress.com/2017/10/11/for-twiglet-45/
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