A twiglet is a short phrase. Or a word. Its aim is to “prompt” a flow. A thought. A memory. If something comes to mind, write. A polished piece isn’t the goal; creativity is. Leave a link, if you’d like your work read, but comments should not be expected. Twiglets are posted on Tuesdays.
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Ah, my ‘png’ arrived silently before I did,
Mid-winter Yawns
I guess being used to the house noises I do not think of them as filling the air first off…
the heat through ducts, the battery clock ticking, wind rattling siding…
House is a tad quiet when one is an empty nester… 😉
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“listen for icicle whispers” – perfect!
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Remixed from text from De’s journal…
https://foundlines.wordpress.com/2018/02/06/remixing-found-text-from-des-journal/
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Excellent!
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Misky, I just saw this for the first time. Swooning. Thank you.
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And here’s the one that’s not pinching someone else’s text for source material. (grin)
https://foundlines.wordpress.com/2018/02/06/twiglet-62/
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But you pinch so well. ; )
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😀
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I like that a *lot*. “The air is disquiet”, great opening.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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FIVE AIR-FULL-OF-SOUND POEMS
1
Listen to the wind exhale
cool breath through tall trees.
Perched birds bow.
2
Where do the unkind words that escape us
go to hide? They echo in the babel of wind;
they tumble from invisible tongues of regret.
3
Sometimes on that thin line
between night and day
the quiet air suspends its silence
and sings stellar hymns.
4
We breathe the gift of air,
take in God’s benevolence,
neglecting codas of gratitude.
5
I heard your voice in the night sky,
in the air of dream forests
whistling come-on songs,
that old familiar re-breath
behind the curtain of my memories.
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They are all so lyrical but I’m drawn to number 2. I think of my own unkind word I regret.
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My favorites: Numbers 2 & 5 – such exquisite language.
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Number 2 is stunning, Sal.
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Sal, this line leaves me breathless:
They echo in the babel of wind;
they tumble from invisible tongues of regret.
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Up-vote that!
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Happy Twiglets Tuesday!
http://rhymeswithbug.com/2018/02/06/air-show
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Air Full of Sound
Somewhere out in space
my grandma calls me to supper
her pleasant country voice
drifted there from the old
home place so many years ago.
And, maybe round Jupiter
one could hear the sobs
when my heart was bereft.
Yesterday, I said a prayer
and it is still wafting upwards
or into another dimension
and I think just maybe
God can hear it all.
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This is so touching. It’s beautiful, Debi.
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Thank you
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Yes, I would like to think our prayers are heard, even listened to…
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This is a mixture of sounds heard, and the sound of wishes and wistfulness. Love it!
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Love the image of “round Jupiter”, that it has gone so far, so lonely.
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WONDERFUL, Debi.
I think just maybe, too.
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Here’s a mixed bag:
http://purplepeninportland.com/2018/02/07/air-full-of-sound/
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I was confused about the bullets. Why?
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In poor neighborhoods, their sound does, unfortunately, fill the air.
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I liked the fountains and the music!
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Thanks, q! It was special.
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After last night’s tempest
https://fredherring.wordpress.com/2018/02/07/for-twiglet-62/
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Are the weather patterns much different from your old house?
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… and here I am talking about weather. How very British of me.
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Not overall. The patterns are the same, but the details are different. There is less pavement, more grass and trees. And Nashville is in a basin–like a kitchen sink and now we live on the counter. Less to slow down the wind. In town we were looking up at the hills, now we look over to them.
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It really sounds idyllic. Well, except for those humid summers.
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“gossip of women grading flowers” and “bereft, without cigarettes”. Just great, as usual.
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The air by the river
fat and full,
larded with the scent of geese,
my dog sniffing in stereo –
and Chinese opera thick
with Empire,
a woman singing eastward
on wings of her losses
from where she sits
on the bench
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Melancholic… as this day – so full of cold rain.
“The air by the river
fat and full,
larded with the scent of geese,”
There was something in our local paper about the return of snow geese to a local watering spot…
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This is REally good.
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Thank you so much!!
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Goodness. Your word choices here are just STUNNING.
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Thank you ever so much.
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[…] tuesday’s twiglet […]
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late to the party. with laundry.
https://whimsygizmo.wordpress.com/2018/02/09/sometimes-tuesdays-poems-tumble-into-friday/
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Happy Friday to you, De! Lovely poem.
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“Airing out my poems”! So good! Love that!
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