A twiglet is a short phrase. Or a word. Its aim is to “prompt” a flow. A thought. A memory. If something comes to mind, write. A polished piece isn’t the goal; creativity is. Leave a link, if you’d like your work read, but comments should not be expected. Twiglets are posted on Tuesdays.
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Good mornin’
https://fredherring.wordpress.com/2018/03/13/for-twiglet-67/
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And a jolly good morning to you, b.
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Daylight savings time. My body thinks it’s still yesterday–or maybe tomorrow.
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We don’t go all springy until the 25th. And in Bogotá they don’t even bother with this nonsense.
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So excellent, as usual!
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And here’s mine done as American Sentences. https://foundlines.wordpress.com/2018/03/13/twiglet-67/
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“moody slash of rain”!!! Perfect.
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Thanks!
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FIVE SLASH-OF-RAIN POEMS
1
Across the yellow-orange petaled backs
of hillside marigolds,
slashes of brutal rain.
2
Not even Noah had a clue
about the coming deluge
until the punishing raging rains
came slashing against the gopher wood.
3
The scourging of Jesus at the pillar
echoes still in the slash of tears
streaming from the eyes of believers.
4
That goodbye kiss that slashed across
your twisted mouth sliced me like a knife.
5
If flower seeds asleep beneath the soil
could wake and speak, they would pray
for slashing rain to quench their floral thirst.
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All lovely, and the last one, loveliest of all.
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There’s something about “brutal rain” that cuts me, deep. Well done.
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Definitely 1, 4 and 5! I got a clear vision of rain slashing the petaled-backs of the marigolds.
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All were great! Especially liked #1!
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Thought I’d try something.
https://wordpress.com/post/fredherring.wordpress.com/4036
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Try that link again. It’s wonky.
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Trying again
https://wp.me/p496Cv-136
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Perfect.
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Nice! Difficult to do!
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I’m back!
https://wojisme.wordpress.com/2018/03/13/twiglet-67-slash-of-rain/
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Good evening! Delighted to see you here again. Left a comment with your lovely poem.
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Nice!
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[…] twiglet #67. […]
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https://whimsygizmo.wordpress.com/2018/03/13/tuesday-2/
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Hello there! Left a comment with your poem. Very nice it is, too.
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Oh wow, “a crash of clouds”. How great is that!
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Good evening!
http://purplepeninportland.com/2018/03/14/slashes-of-rain/
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(big smile)
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Love “knife sharp sheets of rain”, and “blurry prism”!!
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Thanks,q!
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Gray clouds blot out the sun
Wind blows through
Old, drafty windows
And then a
Slash of rain
@candace_kubinec
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Brrr!
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Nice!
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[…] https://thetwiglets.wordpress.com/2018/03/13/twiglet-67/ slash of rain https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hail […]
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Still winter here, woke to 28 F. Any one care to send some warmer air this way.
This weeks prompt made me think of the odd Process of hail… a different type of slashing rain.
Though I also remember being caught in a slashing rain on a vacation…by the shore/ beach.
Maybe I’ll write another verse for that. Maybe though I already have…
Errands to run this morning… I’ll be back to read. 🙂
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We’re warming up here but it’s due to turn wintry again by Friday. Wrap up warm!
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Love “ice bully”. That is really great!
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Cut the crap
About the rain –
all that misty-eyed
plashing and dripping
and endless storming on and on
of watered-down
metaphors that clog
the drain.
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LOL!
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Ahahaha! Thanks!
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Oh, this is fun and sooo true!
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LOLOL! Thanks!
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[…] in response to Misky’s #67 Twiglet prompt. A twiglet is a short phrase, meant to prompt a flow. In this case, the twiglet given was […]
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Fun one! I must do these more often!
https://lillianthehomepoet.com/2018/03/28/recipe/
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Sunnyside up is how I like my days also. 😀
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