
A twiglet’s aim is to “prompt” a thought. If something comes to mind, write. A polished piece isn’t the goal; creativity is. Leave a link, if you’d like your work read, but comments should not be expected.
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A twiglet’s aim is to “prompt” a thought. If something comes to mind, write. A polished piece isn’t the goal; creativity is. Leave a link, if you’d like your work read, but comments should not be expected.
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yes i know
it’s not the rattle of the wind
you’re going to huff and puff
till you blow the house down
fat chance
i know how that story ends
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Good one, Rall.
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Love that last line
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[…] Tuesday Twiglet #277 ~ the wind rattles ~ ——[||]—— Fandango’s One Word Challenge ~ Fabrication ~ […]
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Rattlewind
The wind rattles a dented trash can down
the road. It runs along the vinyl north side
of the house on beaded leather moccasins.
The wind
makes porch swings swing, makes sinnermen hide,
makes the very water fear drowning,
makes dem bones quake in their cups dead and dried.
Who will gainsay the wind? Who will frown
righteously and yell into its yellow teeth: Hie
ye hither mighty blowhard! Who will astound
the wind?
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Water fears drowning … brilliant.
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Fantastic. I LOVE that last verse esp.
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[…] Twiglets – #277 – the wind […]
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[…] your poem. I started this ‘segment’ with a Shadorma = six-line stanza (or sestet); 3-5-3-3-7-5, Twiglet 277 the wind rattles, Eugi; starry nights and What Do You See? 132 Image credit; Caleb Williams @ […]
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[…] the wind rattles […]
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Thanks, Misky!
❤
David
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This is an extraordinary piece of writing. Thanks for joining in this week.
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Five prompts in this story segment, starting with a Shadorma; Trying to Look Beyond the Gray (Spot On?)
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[…] I am in the den, I can hear the shaking of the tree branches as the wind rattles my little abode. It’s like music, Daddy!” She was smiling so big with her face full of […]
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Windy evening to all, Twigs!
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[…] Twiglet #277 […]
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[…] Written for Twiglet #277 “wind rattles” […]
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[…] for The Twiglets prompt, which is “the wind […]
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The Wind Rattles…
the welcome sign at the front door
as though it wants in
but this wind, harsh and cold, like death,
is not welcome, not yet anyway, someday,
I can imagine
if I am in unbearable pain,
or perhaps the last living of family,
like my grandmother who outlived
everyone except one daughter,
maybe then death will be welcomed in
past the welcome sign
and into my lonely life.
like the wind that rattles…
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I can’t figure out why your posts always need approval. Very odd.
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This time because my computer messed up and I loss a bunch of stuff and when HP redownloaded everything I can’t get back to my admin page. I log in as visitor. Trying to figure it all out.
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Ah okay. I thought it was WP playing up on my side.
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What you describe is exactly where my 95-year old aunt is right now. She told me the other day that she’s had enough (heart failure is the issue), and she just wants to die so she can be with my mother (they were good buddies). Gosh, it can sure tear at ones heart to hear her say that, but I do understand.
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It really does. I can understand, too though.
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Debi –
That kind of wind blows when it wants. Seeping in the cracks of our memories, reminding us of those, lost. Whose voices are but brief wistpers in that rattling wind.
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Thanks Jules
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🙂
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