A twiglet is a short phrase. Its aim is to “prompt” thought. A memory. If something comes to mind, write. A polished piece isn’t the goal; creativity is. Leave a link, if you’d like your work read, but comments should not be expected.
[…] was written using Misky’s Twiglet, ‘salty brown skin’ opening with Dylan Hughes’ First Line Friday Prompt, ‘The capitol grew rank in the summer heat, […]
[…] Twiglets 139 brown salty skin […]
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Part four of a tanka series of series: (4) fait du jour…
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“I won’t let them take what’s left” – intriguing!
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If it’s Tuesday . . .
http://purplepeninportland.com/2019/08/14/brown-salty-skin/
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We should hear more about Salty the bunny. Could get dubious quickly!
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Thanks, q. Have to ask my sister.
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[…] https://thetwiglets.wordpress.com/2019/08/13/twiglet-139/ […]
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Aloha joy contagious – Nice! But I think your link is to this Twiglet post, not you poem…
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This is the link To W-W Woman: https://wordwhelmedwoman.home.blog/2019/08/14/brown-salty-skin/
I was told I could swim before I could walk… then we moved far from the ocean… too far.
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Brown earth sprinkled
With salt-licks and pepper trees,
crust of soil we’re cutting the pie,
slicing wide open our eyes
bigger than our stomach,
farm to tabla rasa,
I taste, I taste, the skin of the world,
the salt-sweet sweat of your neck.
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Oh… new concept tabla rasa: an absence of preconceived ideas or predetermined goals; a clean slate.
Nurture vs nature.
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Yes!
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A clean slate could eliminate many decisions by many people.
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[…] was written using Misky’s Twiglet, ‘salty brown skin’ opening with Dylan Hughes’ First Line Friday Prompt, ‘The capitol grew rank in the summer heat, […]
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this one took me to a desperately dark place..
https://violetslentz.home.blog/2019/08/17/isaiah/
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Apologies to everyone. I’ve been away all week, and had little opportunity to read your work. I’ll resume normal attentiveness this week. 🙂
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